Sunday, August 9, 2015

Dane by Liliana Hart

The MacKenzie Family Vol 1

In this novella, bad boy, Dane MacKenzie, is coming home to Surrender, Montana. It’s been ten years since he left the woman he loved behind to make a name for himself, and now he’s bound and determined to claim her once and for all.

But Charlotte Munroe has no desire to welcome home the Prodigal Son with a fatted calf. The bitterness of Dane’s betrayal runs deep, and she has no plans of letting him back into her life. Especially since she’s trying to protect the son Dane isn’t aware exists from heartbreak, since she’s sure he’s only going to walk out of their lives again.

A short story that could have been promising as the characters, especially the MacKenzie's brothers, may have some potential. Only problem…It's a novella. So short, that in one evening and night you have all your action.
If for a one night stand, it could have been realistic. For coming home after 10 years, relinking an old flame, seeing your brothers and learning other heavy stuff… 
Come on? I don't believe in Santa… It's not because I'm reading romance that I just need scene sex and an happy ending. I like to read ! 
So potential but I'm rolling my eyes at the plot.

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